New poem: Treasure of the Aisle

To preface this I only wrote half of this. My best friend helped me write the rest. 
Treasure of the Aisle
The eyes of love bestow their wisdom

As hearts engage in song and glee

The stage is set, the aisles teeming

As music starts the dance to be 
He stares intently as she enters

All eyes upon imagined dreams

She tries her way upon the path

That ends in myriad mysteries
Holy words fade in the background

As metal latches on to skin 

Our souls engage in heavens splendor 

As history forgives our sin
A thousand thoughts, prayers, hopes, and fears

Await a final silky, soft embrace

The culmination of the joys and tears

Sealed all at once, face to face
A drum roll to the breath entices

Our lust now burns our lips in time 

The mind engulfed in silky passion

Forever seems surreal as bells now chime

This treasured touch
Moist and warm with love

Lips hungrily joined with one promised vow

Life’s happiness bursting, all starts here and now

A poet asks for experiences

Hello all,

I have a concept for my next poem. However I would like to hear some experiences about the subject to truly make the poem complete.

The concept is proposing. I want to know any sensations and flashes that went through your head.

Please leave your comments below.

Thank you.

New poem: The Vows of the Untrue

The Vows of the Untrue

Who is there to witness passion dripping from your whisper?

Who seeks to quench the thirst that only knows a sinful flavor?

A chance encounter speaks the names of two embracing lives

Alas, the time has come to speak the words that won’t survive

A gentle hymn of solitude seems lost in wet caresses

The harmony to procreate cuts deep and stains the dresses

There seems to be a mystery and none who dare beseech it

For all is fair in love and war, except for those preach it

The time to hide the gaze of lust is coming to an end

When angels seem to decimate the language of the bed

another time, another place, the auras seems wander

When wedding rings fall to the ground, it makes the lesson fonder

Be still my dear and wait for fate to grant you sight and voice

The harmonies we now convey surrender all but choice

It seems as though the breath on skin invites the sound of flesh

The beating of the hearts is strong as bodies start to mesh

The rain outside is calming to the fervor of the silk

A path that blinds tomorrow is uncommon for our ilk

And who would know the silence stemming from the words “ I do”

When glances to the meadow hide the vows of the untrue

Poem: Theif Life,Just then, Begins

Their Life Just Then, Begins

 

A slumber happened here

Entangled are the bodies

Laying in the flowers

Teeming with sensations

 

Wounds have disappeared

A tainted star absorbs them

And as the moon begins to fade

An evil light ray strikes them

 

A brown-eyed boy begins to wake

He seems to wish for nightfall

Darkness clouds his pretty eyes

He sees the lightning fall

 

A blue-eyed girl awakes with grace

Her focus is on him

A storm exchanges with a glance

Their life just then begins

 

Countless days pass through and through

A passion burns the night

Their love so young and lustful

Blurring cautious thoughts

 

Passion turns to intimacy

As age begins to show

And not a single tear was shed

But many were the fears…

Poem: Frozen River Time

Frozen River Time

Was the answer in her eyes that night?

As he gazed into her soul in fright

Did the corners of her beating heart

Encase his love in clouded parts?

What hour did the clock strike then?

What minuet did love commend?

To orchestrate such gentle streams

While stars gave blessed aqua beams

And when did aura’s consummate?

Causing fireflies to celebrate

Did time just then facilitate?

What distant sorrow suffocates?

How did these lovers come to show?

The world and what it now, bestows

Such romance tied by knots of lives

Unyielding to betraying knives

It matters not what hides in books

Of treasured and deceitful looks

Because this love that’s frozen time

That sits on river’s grace and might

Has aided her, in sealing scars

With him in love, time holds no bars

As wedding bands outshine the stars

“I love you” holds the river, forever in the hearts